Sunday, 11 March 2012

FGC2012 #5- Twitfic- Freedom




Tobias watched  the final drip get removed. His mother bald, emaciated and bruised was finally free. Her fight was over, the cancer had won.

Word count- 140 characters exactly


Challenge: To write a twit-fic style story.
Form: Open
Word Count: 140 characters



Writing an entire story in 140 characters was a challenge for me. It was a challenge last week to keep my story under 3000 words.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous11 March 2012 at 14:10

    This was a fantastic piece. Strong narrative and emotional engagement. Awesome
    Adam B @revhappiness

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  2. Barbara13 March 2012 at 07:29

    OH, how sad! Heart wrenching for so few words... it leaves me wanting more.

    - Barbara @ de rebus
    www(dot)derebus(dot)net/home

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  3. Jan Brown13 March 2012 at 09:10

    A very strong story written with real feeling. This story evokes a very personal emotional response for me, and probably for many others. Well done, Carolyn.

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  4. Paul14 March 2012 at 01:43

    Heart wrenching and very evocative.

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